Katnis Heanow

Basic Information:

Full Name: Katnis Sasha Heanow
Date of Birth: 8th July
Hogwarts Year: 5th
Age on September 1st: 15
Age on Next Birthday: 16
Blood Purity: Halfblood
Hometown: London, England
Current Home: Hogwarts / London, England

Appearance:

Hair: Brown, Straight, Long. Sometimes Curly.
Eye Color: Brown
Height: 168 cm
Weight: 45kg
Body Type: Slim
Dress Style: She likes everything that is in fashion. Mostly jeans and t-shirts.
Other (eg birth mark, tattoo ect): none.

Personality:
Personality:Katnis is a friendly and kind person. She can be opposite too when you hurt someone who she cares about.
This girl trusts people way too easily and gets hurt because of it alot. People sometimes use her trust for bad just to make her life hell. Like her stepsisters, who she used to trust too but they have stabbed her in the back many times, so she can't forgive them. She is loyal only to people who she trusts.
She is brave but she is afraid of losing someone close to her. She tries to keep that fact to herself.
Kat is a smart and hardworking girl. She likes to study and do all homework on time. She also will help others with homework when has time. She has liked to help others since she was young.
She is cheerful one and smiles and laughs even when she is sad. She doesn't like people seeing her crying infront of them, so she waits until she is alone and then lets her tears fall. Only her family and close friends  have seen her cry. She is actually emotional but tries to hide it as long as possible.

Likes: Cats, Cute Boys, Chocolate, Strawberries, Music, Drawing
Dislikes: Mean people, Bullies, Big Dogs, Cherries (Allergic)
Strengths: Playing Guitar, Drawing, Writing Lyrics and Stories
Weaknesses: Allergics, Cute boys, Pop music
Quirks: Bitting nails when nervous
Habits: To paint nails always so she won't bit them anymore.
Best Class: Potions
Worst Class: Transfiguration

Background:
Katnis was born and had a good lfe at first. She has one brother, who is three years older. The girl's life changed when she was five years old . Her mother and brother died in car accident. She herself survived in it and so did her father. After that their life wasn't same. When she was nine her father married again. Her stepsisters, who were the same age as her and were twins began to blame Katnis, when ever there was something broken etc. When she was eleven she got letter from Hogwarts.

She was glad to get out of house but she realized that her stepsisters came too. So far her life has been good in Hogwarts. She always has good grades. She has made a few friends with who she can hang out with and talk. She also has made enemies, even if some of them don't like her thanks to her stepsisters. Kat has had crushes on boys but never talked about it to anyone. She keeps it to herself.

Family;
Mother (Name, age, dead or alive, blood purity): Maria Heanow, 36, Dead, Muggleborn
Father (Name, age, dead or alive, blood purity): Micheal Heanow, 37, Alive, Pureblood
Siblings (Name, age, dead or alive, blood purity): Arthur Heanow, 17, Dead, Halfblood
Other family members (Name, age, dead or alive, blood purity): Agnes & Andrea Heanow, 11, Alive, Halfblood (stepsisters)
Amanda Heanow, 37, Alive, Halfblood (stepmother)

Other;
Wand: Marple Wood, Unicorn Tail hair, 11and half inches
Patronus: White Tiger
Animagus Form (only fifth years and above): n/a
Animal: Tabby cat named Rosa

I appreciate you adding more to the personality section. However, the grammar is still making it hard to read. I really need you to clean that up a little before I can approve you. Thank you!

Okay I changed it then now. Not sure if any better or not. I hope so atleast.

I'm sorry, but I still can't improve this application until the grammar gets better. Maybe try to get access to a computer if it's because you're on your phone? But the rules state that there can't be so many grammar problems as to inhibit understanding. Thanks.

Okay. I changed once again so good as possible.